At the same time it will not in the least
hurt me, should you leave it out altogether, and adhere to your first
intention of adopting Logan's verses.
hurt me, should you leave it out altogether, and adhere to your first
intention of adopting Logan's verses.
Robert Forst
B.
FOOTNOTES:
[Footnote 248: Song CCVII. ]
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CCLXXV.
TO MR. THOMSON.
[The poet's good sense rose at last in arms against the criticisms of
the musician, and he refused to lessen the dignity of his war-ode by
any more alterations. ]
_September, 1793. _
"Who shall decide when doctors disagree? " My ode pleases me so much
that I cannot alter it. Your proposed alterations would, in my
opinion, make it tame. I am exceedingly obliged to you for putting me
on reconsidering it, as I think I have much improved it. Instead of
"sodger! hero! " I will have it "Caledonian, on wi' me! "
I have scrutinized it over and over; and to the world, some way or
other, it shall go as it is.
At the same time it will not in the least
hurt me, should you leave it out altogether, and adhere to your first
intention of adopting Logan's verses.
I have finished my song to "Saw ye my father? " and in English, as you
will see. That there is a syllable too much for the expression of the
air, is true; but, allow me to say, that the mere dividing of a dotted
crotchet into a crotchet and a quaver, is not a great matter: however,
in that I have no pretensions to cope in judgment with you. Of the
poetry I speak with confidence; but the music is a business where I hint
my ideas with the utmost diffidence.
The old verses have merit, though unequal, and are popular: my advice
is to set the air to the old words, and let mine follow as English
verses. Here they are:--
Where are the joys I have met in the morning? [249]
Adieu, my dear Sir! the post goes, so I shall defer some other remarks
until more leisure.
R. B.
FOOTNOTES:
[Footnote 249: Song CCXI. ]
* * * * *
CCLXXVI.
TO MR. THOMSON.
[For "Fy!
FOOTNOTES:
[Footnote 248: Song CCVII. ]
* * * * *
CCLXXV.
TO MR. THOMSON.
[The poet's good sense rose at last in arms against the criticisms of
the musician, and he refused to lessen the dignity of his war-ode by
any more alterations. ]
_September, 1793. _
"Who shall decide when doctors disagree? " My ode pleases me so much
that I cannot alter it. Your proposed alterations would, in my
opinion, make it tame. I am exceedingly obliged to you for putting me
on reconsidering it, as I think I have much improved it. Instead of
"sodger! hero! " I will have it "Caledonian, on wi' me! "
I have scrutinized it over and over; and to the world, some way or
other, it shall go as it is.
At the same time it will not in the least
hurt me, should you leave it out altogether, and adhere to your first
intention of adopting Logan's verses.
I have finished my song to "Saw ye my father? " and in English, as you
will see. That there is a syllable too much for the expression of the
air, is true; but, allow me to say, that the mere dividing of a dotted
crotchet into a crotchet and a quaver, is not a great matter: however,
in that I have no pretensions to cope in judgment with you. Of the
poetry I speak with confidence; but the music is a business where I hint
my ideas with the utmost diffidence.
The old verses have merit, though unequal, and are popular: my advice
is to set the air to the old words, and let mine follow as English
verses. Here they are:--
Where are the joys I have met in the morning? [249]
Adieu, my dear Sir! the post goes, so I shall defer some other remarks
until more leisure.
R. B.
FOOTNOTES:
[Footnote 249: Song CCXI. ]
* * * * *
CCLXXVI.
TO MR. THOMSON.
[For "Fy!
